Sabtu, 14 Maret 2009

MY PET

 MY PET
HELLO MY FRIEND.........................!
 I have a pet, my pet is cat.his name a moncing.
 
             Moncing has fur and a black and white.he is has four legs, two ears, long ears,two eyes and a black, tail a short.teeth very sharp. he likes to eat fish,he also likes to play ball,my pet is very cute.

THANK YOU !

2 komentar:

  1. Assalamu'alaikum Wr.Wb,
    Your blog is good,but your write is "his name a moncing" your better write is It's name is Moncing I suggest that the first sentence using capital letters.
    Wassalamu'alaikum Wr.Wb

    BalasHapus
  2. Assalamu'alaikum Wr.Wb,
    your blog is good,and your write also good,but your writing in paragraph 1 "his name a moncing" and your writing in paragraph 2 "she also likes to play ball,my pet is very cute".
    I would like to ask
    what sex your cat?
    Wassalamu'alaikum Wr.Wb

    BalasHapus